Triplet Tyburn - for Mindful Poetry

Navy
Wavy
Gravy
Crazy
My thoughts run wild wavy, crazy streaks
As I dine on navy gravy leeks

Pretty
Witty
Gritty
Bitty
A ticklish pretty bitty tart
Breaks even my witty gritty heart

Achy
Breaky
Nake-y
Shakey
Boys, you know, are achy breaky ‘bout
Girls who flirt with nake-y shakey clout

Comments: 11

elizabeth evans Sep 9, 2012, 7:26am UTC

That's what happens in every Port. Last summer (April 24) in Fremantle, WA when a USA Navy ship pulled into port, you couldn't count the tarts advertising their wares.

elizabeth evans Sep 9, 2012, 7:26am UTC

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JOHN BECK Sep 9, 2012, 7:53am UTC

You have these down, Coach. Three good ones!

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A. F. Stewart Sep 11, 2012, 3:59pm UTC

A delightful trio.

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Kingston Kaprinski Sep 20, 2012, 3:26pm UTC

A fun verse. No interpretation needed 'because.' Why? 'Because.' The rhymes are like chimes. It's music.

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Connie C. Sep 27, 2012, 7:47am UTC

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Connie C. Sep 27, 2012, 7:47am UTC

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